""Yelchin was found crushed between his car, a 2015 Jeep Grand Cherokee, and the security gate at the end of his driveway."This makes it sound like there were two cars and a gate involved. Consider instead the simpler and more clear:"Yelchin was found crushed between his 2015 Jeep Grand Cherokee and the security gate at the end of his driveway.""
"Great article and a noble effort. I'm looking forward to seeing the product.It's surprising that three RISD grads need to lean on a design kit in order to be user-centered. Having taught at two design schools I shouldn't be shocked by that sort of curriculum and culture, but I still am. "